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Aftermath by ~Vorgoeth:iconVorgoeth:

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Lucifer, standing alone in the night, glaring down upon the slain bodies of his foes after a glorious battle...

Comments, critique, criticism... gimme. Also, please please PLEASE point out as many flaws as you can. Otherwise it'll be harder to improve, see

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~ElectricMayhem Feb 10, 2007, 2:08:05 AM
holy crap the proportion is awesome!nice job!love the character design as usual specially the little details like the belt an the spiked shoes. The way the coat is flowing is a really nice touch an the shredded edges of it look good with the darker edge you've given them. that tree with your crosshatching really reacts nicely with the way it flows. Also love the the dying people's eyes-really cool. erm constructive....the way his leg is bending behind the other is a little strange i think it needs to bend a little less as it kind of looks as if he's balancing on one leg

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.*.*just another lolita*.*.

come up an see some time? :gallery: *ElectricMayhem :blowkiss:
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~Vorgoeth Feb 10, 2007, 4:52:01 AM
He was initially supposed to stand on a cliff, looking down, but I couldn't get that to look good... so the leg ended up like that =P As for proportions, I actually think the torso is wee bit too long... anyways, thanks for the comment :)

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I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every second of it!
The Music House: [link] an art club for music lovers!
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~Damuna Feb 10, 2007, 3:04:41 PM
Well, one good thing to note is that Lucifer appears to be becoming consistent in his appearance. :D The face is done well, and the drawing does look rather cool.

Unfortunately, the torso still looks too long (or maybe it's just misproportioned), and the waist seems rather thin (those two things could be connected). :\ The tree looks rather strange, though I'm not sure if that should concern you. The night sky also looks a bit weird, but it seems that was just added as filler.

Aside from those things, you've done very well. ^_^

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All your base are belong to us.
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~equinexus Nov 24, 2007, 11:21:37 AM
This drawing caught my eye, cause I love badasses that leave people bloodied or dead.

The overall picture is awesome!

I love his character design, especially the coat and the long coat tails.

The shredded knees of the character is something I don't see often, and you made it look good.

The bloodstains are great and are consistant with the ground, and I like how the dead characters all look unique.

The only flaw I see is that his torso is a little bit misporportioned. His back curves in a little too far, I think.

Love it though.

A+ on your Lucifer.
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~Vorgoeth Nov 24, 2007, 12:32:54 PM
Thanks for commenting :D

The misproportioned torso is a constant problem in my drawings... usually they're too long or too thin.

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I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every second of it!
The Music House: [link] an art club for music lovers!
:iconequinexus:
~equinexus Nov 24, 2007, 1:42:33 PM
Just keep practicing and it'll be gone before you know it.

^.^
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